When the wind came down
The trees walked the woods
Before the break of day
And barred the way of spring
With gates of shattered oak
Held to the earth by twisted elm
Their locks of blasted pine.
Sharp as the hunting spear
The sun’s blade splintered
A thousand shards of ice
Spinning across the snow
(a fragment…)
Interesting. What inspired it?
The wind here in Connecticut today, it is cold (about 24 F) with high wind and the number of trees that are dropping limbs is impressive; not a soft spring at all.
Whoa. Sorry
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I like your poems, very concise but lots of imagery.
a frozen/icey shield over springs soft promise to the sun/earth???